I’m pleased to post my entry to Susanna Hill’s 6th Annual Valentiny Contest. This Valentine’s Day story must be appropriate for children (children here defined as ages 12 and under) maximum 214 words in which someone feels brave!
To the Tippity Top
“Ahoy there matey!” G yelled from the treehouse.
Screech! Riley stopped her bike and stared.
The tree seemed to stretch up to the sky.
“I’ve a bounty of Valentine Day treats! Come aboard!” G shouted.
“No, I don’t want to,” Riley answered softly. “I want to practice riding my bike. Look, no more training wheels.”
“Are you scared?” G asked.
“No, I’m not!” Riley said defiantly.
“Pffttt! Scaredy cat!” G said, scampering away.
Up and down the sidewalk, Riley rode, the wind whistling at her back.
“I’m not a scaredy cat! Am not! Am not!” Riley grumbled.
Faster and faster she rode, turned the corner and…
Screech! She stopped short. Something caught her eye.
Riley peered over the handlebars, jumped off her bike, and knelt down.
A ladybug was climbing a stalk of grass, chasing a heart-shaped beetle.
“She’s so brave,” Riley said. “Going to the tippity top.”
That gave Riley an idea.
Riley turned around and raced back to the treehouse.
Screech!
And she climbed and climbed like her grandma taught her until her bike was as tiny as that ladybug.
“I’m here!” she sang out.
G turned around. “Where are you?”
“On top of the world! I am brave!” Riley said with her mouth stuffed with chocolates. “Let’s play pirates!”
Good for Riley, being brave enough to face her fear! I bet she felt on top of the world in more ways than one!
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Thank you! Yes, she felt like she was king of the world!
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What a full story packed into few words! I love that Riley is inspired by a ladybug. And I love the title!
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Jessie,
Thank you so much! I had a lot of helpful advice from my writers group. I went through at least 11 drafts before I submitted this version. Glad you like the story.
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This story is delightful! I liked the sound words and action, as well as the ladybug going after the heart-shaped beetle.
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Thank you so much! Wish me luck!
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Brave Riley climbing the tree and feeling on top of the world. Good job and good luck!
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Thanks Nancy!
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Lovely story – the being hesistant but getting inspired to, indeed, face the fears and climb up! There are so many layers in the ‘child’ story!
Keep me informed about your other stories! Cheering for you from Holland
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